Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Majority
of individuals believe the basic environmental issue is Correct article usage
The majority
elimination
of special Add an article
the elimination
species
of creatures in our century. On the other hand
, some people say other problems are more crucial. In my point of view, loss
of particular Correct article usage
the loss
species
could change our planet and make it worse than now.
In fact, some animals and plants are numerously important. Generally, most of them are the base of the food chain in
our planet. Change preposition
on
Moreover
, importance
of some of them in food chains Add an article
the importance
are
more than Change the verb form
is
Correct pronoun usage
that of
of
us. wheals, if they do not exist in future, the face of Earth would change. Change preposition
apply
For example
, Bees and butterflies are too necessary for plants’ pollination. whereas,
without Remove the comma
apply
them
a great number of plants would be omitted and if it is done, numerous Add a comma
,them
species
would get rid of
. Change preposition
apply
Furthermore
, omitting plants’ pollination which human
cause Fix the agreement mistake
humans
this
our planet would rapidly be a mortal plot.
Another idea is we have more important environmental issues which we do anything about them or we do not care obviously
. Ironically, Change preposition
about obviously
human
make Fix the agreement mistake
humans
recently
huge number of Add an article
a recently
problem
Fix the agreement mistake
problems
in
Earth which do not consider Change preposition
on
them
or do not know Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
effects of them. Change the word
their
Besides
, he did not make attempt to solve them. For instance
, climate warming is a whole world problem which is able to changes
all sides of our life in future but because we could not Wrong verb form
change
to
see it directly, we do not think seriously about it. Basically, recent researches show the average Fix the infinitive
apply
of
Earth’s temperature is getting two degrees hotter in near future. Change preposition
apply
However
, developed countries which are responsible of
that have not Change preposition
for
consider
it. But, it would Change the verb form
considered
be happened
if we want or not.
In conclusion, I believe considering to loss of particular Change to the active voice
happen
have happened
species
are
as important as the other environmental happened and we have to care about it. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
in addition
to, how we due to worry about this
now, our next
generation would live more comfortable.Submitted by ahad.dana on
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