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Some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of the population who are aged 15 and younger. What is your opinion of the current and future effects it may have in those countries?

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In many developing countries
such
 as India, it is evident that there is a constant
increase
 in the
population
, especially the younger generation which is under 15 years of age. The rise in
population
 will have a greater
impact
 on the short term and long term which will be advantageous in the former while disadvantageous in the latter.
This
 essay discusses both the current and future implications of
this
 scenario. With the recent lockdowns enforced by the government, owing to the pandemic situation, the families had to stay at home which has resulted in a new society called the COVID generation. The immediate
impact
 because of
this
 is an
increase
 in sales of the child care products and their associated market.
Secondly
, a recent trend in the photography industry for
the
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newborns has paved the path for a new industry.
Finally
, as most of the parents are working, they prefer to send their kids to the daycare centres which are now available at every corner of the street. Though there is a number of new ventures emerging due to the existing situation that increases the revenue of the government, there will be a serious
impact
 on the economy in the future
that is
 worrisome. When these millennials grow older, there will be a huge
impact
 on the democracy's economy. An
increase
 in the
population
 indicates that the number of jobs required in the forthcoming years will be high.
In addition
 to
this
, there will be a depletion
in
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 natural resources, the agricultural lands are converted into complexes to accommodate the growing
population
 which in turn will make the country dependent on imported goods for the livelihood would result in inflation. With fewer jobs and more cost of living, the crime rates across the nation will
increase
. To conclude, though the
increase
 in the number of births helps certain countries' economies bloom at the moment, there will be a severe
impact
 in the near future if proper steps are not taken by the authorities in charge. The State and Central parties must plan effectively to meet the needs of their
population
 and the economy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • ever-increasing
  • proportion
  • vibrant
  • innovative
  • strain
  • cater
  • predominantly
  • unemployment
  • adequately
  • GDP (Gross Domestic Product)
  • sustainability
  • demographic
  • reforms
  • social unrest
  • illusioned
  • dynamic
  • global stage
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