You recently did a short cookery course. The school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

Dear Miss. Chevrolet, I'm writing
this
to thank you for the Spring Cookery Course that you have designed for home-cook recipes and compelling diverse cuisine from Northern Brazil. I have joined
this
course from the
first
day to learn by heart many savoury dishes and kitchen tips. On my
first
day, Miss. Emma, our teacher kindly introduced the secrets of butter used during cooking foods.
This
is useful by increasing beef smells and reducing salts from salted butter. We have collaborated to make an excellent competition in order to study recipes and the meal representation. Meanwhile, I found that these unfortunate ranks will be repeated in the
next
semester with similar lessons and attendance instructors. I so loved the teaching methods of Miss. Emma. And, I'd be happy to the women's organization will offer the new cookery course with her. All students from Miss. Emma collection whose are strongly agreed about barkery collection from
this
program. I am happy to receive getting back about your idea and my pleasure to be a participant. Sincerely,
Morica
Correct your spelling
Monica
Pham.
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