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Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Opinions are divided on whether physical fitness or
mental
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the mental
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 attitude is significant in
sports
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. In my opinion, both mental and physical health are equally important for
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success
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 in
sports
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. I will discuss and analyse both of these points of view in detail in
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 essay. On the one hand, sportsmen should be strong and fit to perform better in games.
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, many studies have proven that
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muscular strength and physical tolerance are vital to
win
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 in
sports
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. Undoubtedly, lean and weak individuals cannot play well to defeat
the
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 opponents in the
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playgrounds
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play grounds
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playgrounds
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.
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,
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 the physical stamina and ability to cope with tiredness,
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the greater
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 the chances of winning for a team.
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,
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the physical
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 ability to perform
outstanding
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 in
sports
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 is imperative for achieving
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brilliant results.
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, the significance of
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 ability to deal with the different circumstances and situations in
sports
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 is equally indispensable. Players with
positive
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a positive
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 attitude have more chances of
success
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 compared to their negative minded counterparts.
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, an optimistic sportsman takes
failours
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failures
 positively and
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 lessons from them which assist him to gain
success
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 and achievements in the future.
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, without a positive mind, players cannot make their way through
sports
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 towards an exceptional and extraordinary
success
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 in their sporting careers. In conclusion, definitely, physical stamina ensures triumph in games but no one can deny the importance of mental aptitude for
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victory in
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. I,
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, believe that
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success
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 in
sports
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 requires
atheletes
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athletes
 to be strong both physically as well as mentally.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • flexibility
  • accessibility
  • tuition fees
  • commuting
  • accommodation
  • multimedia
  • interactive tools
  • enhance
  • cater to
  • face-to-face interaction
  • personalized attention
  • complex concepts
  • motivation
  • discipline
  • structure
  • extracurricular activities
  • networking
  • university experience
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