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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many
people
 argue what is the best way to reduce
crime
. Some
people
 believe the most effective way to reduce crimes is to give prisoners longer sentences, while others believe there are other ways to minimize the
crime
 numbers. There are many reasons why
people
 can commit a
crime
such
 as poverty, greed, lust, gluttony, and sloth. They know their action can lead them to prison, but sometimes those
people
 are in a pinch situation. Prisoners receive sentences depending on the
crime
 they do. While many
people
 believe by serving in jail, these prisoners will rethink what
crime
 they committed.
For example
, murderers are usually sentenced
from
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 15 to 25 years in jail. While corruptors, they usually sentenced from 5 until 10 years, depending on how much money they take. Despite
this
 method is actually used to set an example in many countries,
however
, it seems that the
crime
 number is still increasing every year. While many
people
also
 believed that there are some other ways to reduce the
crime
 numbers.
People
 who have a strong background in
education
 are unlikely to do a
crime
. The reason behind it is that they can tell the difference between good deeds and bad deeds. That's why a good
education
 is needed in the early days for many adolescents. In conclusion, to reduce the
crime
 number, I believe
education
 needs to be the focal point. Without proper
education
, the younger generation can't differentiate between good and bad acts. While punishment
such
 as longer sentences needs to be changed, it's better to have a death sentence, if one committed a horrendous
crime
.
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