Countries with a long average working time are more economically successfull than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extend you agree or disagree?
Some people believe that lengthening the working
time
of citizens could allow the country to have better economic development than the nations that have shorter office hours. Use synonyms
This
essay completely disagrees with that argument for some reasons.
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Firstly
, a long working day is not enough if people don’t use effective management. Linking Words
Therefore
, increasing working Linking Words
time
is not helpful without the use of technologies. Use synonyms
For instance
, it is widely known that North Korea’s population is considered the most working population globally. An average working day there lasts for nine hours. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
this
country is not economically advanced. Linking Words
This
means that the length of the working hours does not affect economic development.
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Secondly
, a long working Linking Words
time
does not guarantee a high outcome. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, it negatively impacts the results since long-hour workers are likely to have higher fatigue. They Linking Words
consequently
cause a lack of concentration and decreased productivity. In the worst case, they might get a work-related disease Linking Words
such
as depression or even suicide. Linking Words
For example
, the Japanese are well-known as long-Linking Words
time
workers, and their industriousness has contributed to the development of the economy since the end of the 2nd World War. Nowadays, the suicide rate among the working generation is relatively high, and the economy of Japan is becoming slower and slower. These health problems are not suitable for economic growth, but they will Use synonyms
also
cost immaterial to society.
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. I believe that well-being conditions are essential to contribute to the economy.Use synonyms
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