While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem now, others believe that deforestation has a more detrimental effect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While it is widely claimed that the most urgent environmental issue is global warming, some argue that

deforestation

has a more pessimistic effect. Both points of view and the reason why I believe that people should pay their most attention to global warming will be elaborated on in

this

essay.

To begin

with, it might seem sensible for some to believe that climate change has affected temperature all over the world.

This

is possibly because it has contributed to

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an increase

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in extreme weather events

such

as heavy storms, downpours and flooding. Studies carried out by Oxford University,

for example

, revealed that hurricanes are likely to become more intense, on average, in a warming world.

On the other hand

, opponents of

this

idea might propose that

deforestation

should be taken into a consideration as the most pressing ecological matter these days. To put

in other words

, they consider that individuals should opt for promoting tree planting and restoring forests. In

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and

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age,

for instance

, many countries are more likely to experience unhealthy air pollution caused by

deforestation

. From

this

perspective, it is understandable why some would prefer

deforestation

to be the most urgent environmental issue. Personally, I would argue in favour of people considering global warming as a crucial issue on the sustainability of the environment, seeing that they tend to disregard the ecological consequences of their actions.

For example

, if human activities incessantly release large amounts of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases into the atmosphere,

this

could cause detrimental effects on the world,

such

as burning fossil fuels from car emissions.

Consequently

, assuming that individuals have

a

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more awareness to select alternative energy, it could reduce the planet-warming effects of fossil fuels. In conclusion,

although

it is undeniable that

deforestation

should be considered

as

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the most important problem of the environment, I am of the opinion that climate change should be taken into a problem solving as a priority in order to mitigate the pessimistic effects of environmental damage contributed by the human activities.