Working patterns have changed a lot. Now many people work online from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this way of working?

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Over recent years, there have been changed new job patterns in
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. Today, a lot of person earns money
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internet
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from home. Some commentators see
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as positive whilst other experts have grave reservations. Regarding,
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type of way
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working can be beneficial for some people.
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, if an office has working online, employers can
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their
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money,
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and they
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won’t have commute
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. Commuting can be tough, depending on where they live in
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city, it can be hard.
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,
online
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job can save
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. Many people living in big cities
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spend a lot of
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to reach
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their working place because there are loads
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of traffic
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jam
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, as well as man and female can plan their
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so that they have more
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for their family and
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house
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than when they have to commute or have to work late.
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, it creates to being relation while working. They can work in their Slack suit if they want. It feels like a little bit less pressure.
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, the negative aspect of
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way needs to be mentioned. The
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thing to highlight undermines social relations. Some humans would like to have communication together; they are
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and constant movement. So don’t like to sit in one place for
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time
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whilst it may lead to anxiety and depression for them. Lack of self-discipline can make one become less productive and
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creating
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laxity for them.
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this
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new way
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job limited mobility because they have to sit permanently when working which make endanger the health of human. In conclusion,
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to get money with
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the internet
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can have both positive and negative consequences. Overall, I am personally wary about
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type of endorsement and fear that it may be harmful. I would like to see social scientists carrying out research to determine what positive and negative effects have
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pattern.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Flexibility
  • Work-life balance
  • Commuting
  • Productivity
  • Personalized
  • Geographical constraints
  • Isolation
  • Overwork
  • Discipline
  • Dependency
  • Technical issues
  • Collaboration
  • Communication
  • Security issues
  • Sensitive information
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