Some people say music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music
is one of the best medicine for human life.
Moreover
, some of them declare that various cultures and age groups can unify because of
songs
and other musical arts. While others give their opposition about
this
.
This
essay will focus on these views and eventually I will give my opinion too.
To begin
with, wherever people have a notion that
songs
are able to unite communities around the world. Particularly, they think
music
has the power to express their humanity, love, friendships and so on.
For example
, currently, Srilanka has faced economic crises due to
the
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political
corruptions
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and citizens have tried to express their opposition against the government by song.
Consequently
, it paves the way to speed uniqueness and peace among the communities to tackle problems in society.
On the other hand
, others believe that
music
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not able to make uniqueness among Pepe because that variations in age groups
is
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the major issue for
this
. Whenever grown adults always try to listen
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80s and 90s
songs
rather than new
trendings
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.
However
, youngsters are
intrest
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interested
to
listen
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western cultures like hip-hop, jazz and so on.
For instance
, when the public
are
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given their opinion about what
songs
are the best nowadays, we can
observed
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they create against thoughts among them.
Therefore
,
definitely
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it will never help to make
peacefulness
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. In conclusion, from my perspective, I believe there is a good and bad
results
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in
music
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the music
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industry which some
of
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people
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the people
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think
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encourage
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to bring anyone together. If we have
capability
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to use
this
in a positive manner, it will become
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powerful weapon for our lives.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural diversity
  • harmony
  • integration
  • bridging gaps
  • foster
  • ignite
  • embrace
  • communicate
  • celebrate
  • appreciate
  • inclusivity
  • universal language
  • emotional resonance
  • shared experiences
  • intercultural dialogue
  • intergenerational connections
  • cultural exchange
  • catalyst
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