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When someone achieves greatness thanks to an innovation or other breakthrough, it is usually agreed that the individual has a high level of intelligence. Do you think that inborn thinking skills play the main role in the successful life of people? What role does ‘nurtured’ intelligence play i achievements n of a successful person?

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It is believed that most people achieve their goals thanks to an inborn brilliance,
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 from my point of view inborn
skills
 don’t play
the
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 huge role in
thriving
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 life of humans and the
skills
 that have been gained through personal experiences are
mor
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more
 valuable. Genes have been considered
as
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one of the most important and one of the most influential factors that can affect the understanding of a child for a long time. There have been made a lot of
studies
 in the sphere of psychology to learn what influence they have. The
studies
 show that most
of
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kids
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, especially
first
-born children in most families have inherited
the
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 high IQ and showed higher scores at
schools
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comparing
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 to their younger siblings. These findings supported the influence of inborn intellectual abilities on
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 successful life, providing evidence for supporters of
this
 point of view.
However
, there have been made
studies
 results
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which confronted the previous ones and showed that environment and life experience have affected the mind of
person
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 too.
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,
cognitive
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 development of children varies due to the various environment they are raised
.
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 In other
studies
 factors
such
 as nutrition, home environment and formal schooling have been highlighted as the ones that affect
judgement
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 of children. It shows that abilities that have been gained through their own experience had more influence than the
skills
 that they inherited from parents. In summary, the
skills
 and abilities that have been gained through personal wisdom
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bigger
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 role in achieving success.
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