More and more people nowadays are buying fashionable clothes. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your experience.
It is true that trendy wardrobes are more popular at present. People change their dressing styles easier. In my opinion, I believe that there are more disadvantages to
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case and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view.
To start with, one of the biggest reasons why buying fashionable clothes has more negatives is that people have to spend more money on them since they will be outdated sooner. Linking Words
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, the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University revealed that 80% of Thai teenagers in Bangkok tend to spend money on newly released styles which enable them to feel more confident. Having said that, cost plays a major role in the drawback of buying fashionable clothing. Linking Words
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, they sometimes choose to dress up according to the trend without considering what is suitable and fits them.
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is the fact that out of date clothes will increase the number of world rubbish which can increase the Linking Words
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is because if solid waste management as the discarded textile is ineffective, it can Linking Words
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, in the recent news, it has been reported that over 1000 tonnes of clothing were left in landfills annually. Linking Words
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of increasing world's temperature which can be considered a drawback.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite