You have just missed a friend’s party. Write a letter to apologise. In your letter: apologise to your friend explain why you did not attend the party say what you plan to do to make up for missing the party.

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I'm writing to apologise for missing your house party. I can't tell you how sorry I am.It's completely my mistake for missing

this

occasion.I am very happy for you.I know how much hard work you did to make it

this

far.You're very excited to show around the house to all of our friends.You must have wondered why didn't I show up but accepted the invitation. The actual truth behind

this

is I entered the wrong date on my calendar as

Friday is the weekend actually the party was yesterday.How stupid I am!.I realised When everybody posted their pictures on Instagram and Facebook.I could see that I really missed out on an amazing party. Anyway,I'd like to treat you to

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lunch at the new restaurant that just opened in the town.I'd

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take you to your favourite movie that releasing soon.please let me know a suitable day for you.I promise I'd attend

this

time by entering the correct day in my calendar.You should show me your lovely house on another occasion. See you soon, Shobha

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

176 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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