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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, high level of sugar
products
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 has become more popular among
people
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, especially in the foods and drinks industry, leading
people
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 to face physical issues. Some
people
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 argued that an increase in prices for sugary
products
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 will be an effective way to encourage
people
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 to eat less.
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, I disagree with
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 measure since
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 cannot lead to a long-term solution. It is partly true that more expensive prices of sugary
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 can affect purchasing decisions among
consumers
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,
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, it can be considered an ineffective way to make
people
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 consume less sugar since increasing
price
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 does not guarantee a change in eating behaviour driven by inappropriate attitudes of
addiciting
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addicting
 sugary
products
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.
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, sometimes it can lure
people
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 to buy more because of misunderstanding.
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, in Thailand, there are two different brands of soda that are extremely popular for carbonated lovers called Coca-Cola and EST. Coca-cola product is usually sold at a higher
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 compared to the EST, which led
people
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 to buy more of
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 brand since they might think
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 expensive
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 indicating
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a better taste soda.
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, an increase in the
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 of sugary
products
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 will not encourage
consumers
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 to buy less,
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, they might tend to buy more or switch to another substituted one which is cheaper.
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,
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 solution establishes the unequal right of
consumers
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 compared to producers as they need to purchase an expensive product, while the quality remains the same. The advantages will belong to the manufacturers which will favour them to produce more unhealthy diets
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 of having the development of healthy
products
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. Taking chocolates as an example, despite a higher
price
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 among other snacks, some luxurious brands continually expose other lines of
products
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 introduced to the market, resulting in customers having more choices on sweets. As a consequence, research on useful snacks will not grow in its numbers unless they provide more profits than chocolates do. In conclusion, I firmly disagree with making sugary
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 more expensive since
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 way does not confirm the different result and be unfair to
consumers
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. In my opinion, the authority should handle
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 problem by training
people
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 to have appropriate lifestyles in the long run.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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