As cyber-perpetration is becoming a main online problem, social media and technological companies should be obligated by government to launch strict policy(ies) against cyber-bullying. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, in the world of developed technologies 

cyberperpetration

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cyber perpetration

 is a relevant problem. Some think social media and 

technological

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companies

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 must launch strict 

policy

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policies

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 against cyber-bullying, and I totally agree with 

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 statement. 

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, cybercrimes

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as bullying, hacking, trespassing, spying,

spreading

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viral files are more than tiny harmless issues, these problems lead to poor psychological health, damage

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property, etc. According to the statistics, 70% of teen suicide is caused by cyberattacks on

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social media, death threats or online conflicts. Fraud is

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prevalent amongst older users of the internet. since

younger

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generation is tricky enough not to be

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deceived

decided

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pictures with cute animals or

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to get 1 billion dollars along with the newest domestic tools do not often attract teenagers, or they simply understand that there is "no money on the ground".

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of all, people often see the internet as a safe place where everyone can be

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they want and do whatever they want, and,

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why some do not think properly before typing offensive stuff or "filter their words". Teenagers and kids

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the most susceptible social group, which is why I think social media and

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companies

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should be obligated by

government

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the government

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to launch strict policies against

cyberperpetration

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cyber perpetration

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the safety of civilians is a priority. Even though some

companies

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already have user instructions and rules and despite the existence of "netiquette" cyber-attacks do still exist.

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, it is

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responsibility of each to be polite and keep the "netiquette". People often recommend

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careful and ignore the

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bullies and haters, but, it is not easy.

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, ignoring does not help with more serious crimes

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as spying and fraud. To conclude, it is important to provide

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environment for people both online and in real life.

Companies

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should put limitations and strict rules along with punishment for

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the perpetrator

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perpetrator

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