You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Writhe a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter -describe what you enjoyed about the course. -say how much cooing you’ve done since the course -suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to provide my feedback about the cookery course which I joined

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semester.

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of all, I really enjoyed most of the classes providing me

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good quality of facilities for cooking and nice teachers. The course I attended was “Fantastic Desserts” and I learnt about various kinds of unique and amazing desserts which I have hardly tried before. Especially, When I

practiced

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to make

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“Universe Mountain” which is made with mint chocolates, White cream and cinnamon powder, it was so exciting to me and it was really

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dessert” ever.

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, I tried to make it for my family every weekend since I became to succeed to make it

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. After that, “Universe Mountain” became one of my family’s favourite sweets. By the way, I realized that there is no Asian dessert course in your school, so I would like to request to open the class for it if it is possible. I and many of my peers hope to learn Asian gourmet as well. It will be very appreciated if you consider my suggestion and wish to attend the new program. Thank you Sophie Jo

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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