You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Writhe a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter -describe what you enjoyed about the course. -say how much cooing you’ve done since the course -suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to provide my feedback about the cookery course which I joined

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semester.

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of all, I really enjoyed most of the classes providing me

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good quality of facilities for cooking and nice teachers. The course I attended was “Fantastic Desserts” and I learnt about various kinds of unique and amazing desserts which I have hardly tried before. Especially, When I

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“Universe Mountain” which is made with mint chocolates, White cream and cinnamon powder, it was so exciting to me and it was really

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fantastic

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dessert” ever.

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, I tried to make it for my family every weekend since I became to succeed to make it

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. After that, “Universe Mountain” became one of my family’s favourite sweets. By the way, I realized that there is no Asian dessert course in your school, so I would like to request to open the class for it if it is possible. I and many of my peers hope to learn Asian gourmet as well. It will be very appreciated if you consider my suggestion and wish to attend the new program. Thank you Sophie Jo