In some countries, students are required to study a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. In other countries, however, students study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each education system? Which system is better?

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Each country has its own educational system with different types of
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syllabus. In some
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, the Thai education system,
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are required to
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a limited
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of
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in high school while in some
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,
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as the US, and UK
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can
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a wide
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systems
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have advantages and disadvantages, in my opinion. To
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a limited
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of
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from the age of fifteen,
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need to make a decision on their
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path and career path at the early stage of education.
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system can cause
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to be well-prepared for their higher education in university,
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, in engineering, architecture, medicine, etc. Studying a limited
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makes the course more in-depth and more specific to prepare
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for their
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path.
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,
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studying a wide
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can lead to more freedom to explore themselves and what they like. At the age of fifteen, lots of
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are still not sure about their life after graduation, with the wide
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of
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,
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can explore the subject that they are interested in with no compulsory core modules.
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, a student can
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both
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Spanish and biology.
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have different aspects of benefit, a wide
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is better in my opinion. From my experience studying limited
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only Math-Science, which limited my choice in university as well. At that age,
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are still exploring themselves and shouldn’t be limited by the choice they made. I was limited to Math-Science but I was
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interested in arts, history, and philosophy as well that I couldn’t choose to
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. In conclusion,
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educational
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have their own benefit, from my personal view, a wide
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of
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is better because that can give
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the freedom to explore different
subjects
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they are interested in.
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