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Some people say that it is a important to kept your house and workplace tidy. With everything organised and it is placed .what is your opinion about this.

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 at a house
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 capt that
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 in well organised that it should not hygiene
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 in the kitchen we do all
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 in their
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 and clean it in a proper way so that the food and not hygiene.
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 put some
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 in their
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 so they are injured and step over it.
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 if a
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 in the right
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 it shows their impression of
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person of his colleagues. In
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 in the office
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 decorated their desks in a proper manner so that they do not lose their
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 and important documents that are given by the manager .
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 if
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 should not organise their
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 in a proper way so that they leave an impression against their colleagues and friends. In ,conclusion if
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 the proper way and everything organise in their
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 because of
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 they cannot lose
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