some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the rapid development of ,medicine folk live more than in the past. The vast majority of the population ponder that as the average life expectancy increases today , the nation's withdrawal of old age needs to be extended . I completely disagree with

this

opinion and I will explain

this

in my essay.

First

of all, high aged nation are not influenced the work efficiency oppositely to work development. Because of one less reaction and chronicled illness , sick leaves are always banned from their mobility.

Such

illnesses stimulate humans allowing more time for their health. Prolonging pullout youth is impairing

this

occasion.

Furthermore

, it reduces the employment rate of many young societies. What I mean by

this

, is

this

not only decreases the workplace but

also

deprive youngs in increase their duty and

this

s not give job satisfaction to youngs when they always use the same old ideas

instead

of their perfect and advanced ideas.

Secondly

, grandparenting is the base of our society.

For instance

, great upbringing and utmost nursing in children and young generation relative to grandparents. Because they teach modesty and ethics uniquenesses to children .

That is

, they are providers of traditional cultural values.

Similarly

, when folk retire , they start a new life , they begin to realize their unattainable dreams, and they rid o various work pressures. To infer, I think it is a mistake to extend the retirement age as longevity increases. Prolonging the withdrawal age due to the increase in the average life will cause inconvenience , not convenience , to young and old humans.