some people claim that too much focus and resources have been spend to protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Many
people
believe that nowadays, greater attention and ample amount of money
is
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being used for the conservation of
animals
and birds.
However
, I completely disagree with
this
notion and in my
opinion
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it is indeed the duty of the government as well as
people
to contribute
in
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the preservation of the wildlife. It is not uncommon these days that many
animals
are dying either due to natural calamities
such
as global warming and water floods or
by
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man made
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problems
such
as deforestation.
For instance
, many species are on the verge of extinction
such
as
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Panda and Indian Tiger. Pertaining to
this
, many countries worldwide have made a provision for building a significant number of
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wildlife
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wild life
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wildlife
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centuries where these
animals
can be kept and provided
goodcare
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good care
.
Therefore
, if necessary measures are taken
such
as providing them
natural
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habitats they can surely be saved from vanishing. Other than
this
, undoubtedly, wildlife
animals
are very important for the heritage of a country.
Hence
both the authorities and
people
should make cumulative efforts for the preservation of these creatures.
For instance
, these days many organisations are being run by the
governmnet
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government
as well as
people
for the welfare of
endagered
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endangered
animals
. These
angios
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engines
anxious
not only help in raising
fund
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for the welfare of these species but they have many volunteers
also
who work for free for the welfare of these
animals
. To summarize, it is very essential to preserve wildlife as they are very crucial for preserving
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nations
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heritage and history. Authorities
as well as individuals
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should equally contribute
for
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the preservation of these
animals
. I strongly believe, that all the possible measures should be taken for the conservation of these creatures by providing them
a
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protective environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wildlife conservation
  • ecosystem preservation
  • sustainable development
  • biodiversity
  • habitat destruction
  • ecological balance
  • ethical responsibility
  • economic benefits
  • endangered species
  • poaching
  • education and awareness
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