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Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Some people believe that living in big
cities
 is getting easier while others think that it is very hard to reside in big
cities
. Every individual has their own opinion based on their interest. I will discuss both perspectives in subsequent paragraphs and will give my opinion at the end. On the one hand, there are some reasons why some people say that living in a big centre is becoming easier as there are many facilities available like better transportation, medical facilities and education.
For instance
, metro trains in Delhi have made travelling comfortable and safer. Another striking benefit is that
cities
 have better wifi connections so that every individual can do their work at a time.
Finally
, there are many new restaurants, theatres and shopping malls are opening so that people can enjoy themselves in their leisure time.
ON the other hand
, some society advocates that living in urban areas is very hard because the population increases day by day.
Firstly
, living in big
cities
 is very congested nowadays.
For instance
, according to the survey of Hindustan time in ,2020 the total population of Delhi increased by 20% in one year. Environmental problems are another drawback to residing in a metropolis. Nowadays, air and noise pollution increases. It will bring health issues for every individual. So that's why living in big
cities
 is very difficult I believe that big
center
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 have lots of issues but they are being controlled and city life is getting better. There are lots of opportunities for students as they get a better education
in
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downtown . Another benefit is graduates
also
 get job opportunities in big places to shine their careers. In conclusion, capital
are
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 becoming better and while there are
also
 many problems associated with living in the city.
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