Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.

There is no doubt that the population of worldly
cities
is increasing because of migration, and the lifestyle of
cities
becomes worse day by day. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with these situations.
Firstly
, fewer opportunities for employment in rural
areas
can force an individual to migrate to developed
areas
for better lives .
This
is because all factories and businesses are available there, which offers better jobs for employees.Due to
this
, the crowd of people lead to overpopulation in the city , which creates serious issues,
such
as an unsafe environment, scarcity of proper houses, health problems and traffic jams.As, using maximum private vehicles ,especially during working hours not only leads to traffic congestion but is
also
harmful to the environment because of pollution. 
For example
, Delhi is the capital city of India as well as the biggest industrial city,which provides more job opportunities to young people, due to
this
they are moving there to make their future safe and brighter. To tackle these issues, the right solution comes from the wise policy of the government.Primarily, if the government takes some actions and tries to provide employment everywhere
such
as shifting some factories and industries into rural
areas
, which can help to mitigate
this
trend. Because of
this
, youngsters do not have any need to go to other places to search for jobs, they can get them in their own
areas
. owing to
this
the crowd of
cities
can be controlled as well as all problems
also
solved with these efforts. In conclusion,
although
the overpopulation of urban
cities
is the biggest issue worldwide, due to some suggestions it can be solved.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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