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research says more and more business training and business meeting are taking place online. do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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One of the most conspicuous trends of today,s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people who believe that more and more business training and business meeting are getting more broadly in the pace of working platform. Here, I will the articulated points of view of the pros and cons regarding the online meetings which are highly preferred. There is a widespread worry that
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 will only lead to a myriad of concerns in the people,s life who are fully involved in the online meetings rather than in person,
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, there are few advantages in the different ways as people can save a lot of time if they are saving the time of travel and other expenditures meanwhile in-person meeting.
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, since covid-19 has spread out in the world, employees are doing most of their term online schedule and they are using other occasions for other chores which are quite helpful in the family as a good assistance.
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, online office assembly, are helpful in the time savings and environmental contribution to the air pollution and noise pollution.
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, on the other side, there are a few disadvantages as well along with advantages, as workers are not having teamwork altogether and they are deprived of a few skills and not capable to have a good relationship among staff.
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, sometimes employees cannot make a pace of work and make others understand as they can do in-person meetings.
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, research has been conducted in Japan that the business gets more progress which expertise do more gatherings at the office rather than digitalized. In the conclusion, in view of the arguments outlined above, it can be observed that it totally depends on the organisation which way they get more benefits the way they do conferences.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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