Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development?
There has been a drastic debate over whether is good or not for
countries
to become more and more similar due to people being able to buy the same items anywhere. In this
essay, I will discuss both these views and give my own opinion on the matter. Firstly
, I will explore the way this
innovation has changed the way human beings have similar products and secondly
, I will share the drawbacks of this
trend.
To begin
with, this
attitude towards it is positive, I believe the case of this
can be beneficial. In this
case where we can buy the same products anywhere in a kind of globalization. In this
situation, we can benefit a lot from it. 1st opinion, it will help to narrow the gaps between rich states and poor states. Poor states derive the right to buy commodities as same as the rich ones. In this
addition, buying the same products anywhere is able to promote competition among the retailers, which can not only lower the price of goods but also
better the quality.
Besides
, this
kind of change will affect the other countries
' economies. Because of ,this
some countries
became powerful. For, example if every nation has the same machinery this
will be directly impact
export and import. In Change the verb form
directly impact
this
process, it has a possibility for different countries
to tighten their connection and strengthen communication, resulting in efficiency enhanced.
To summarize the above, I imagine that this
kind of fusion of market is positive, not only can it benefit customers, but also
do well for the whole market. We are able to insist on globalization can all countries
profit from it.Submitted by nagendranp1991 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
