Because of the rising cost of housing, many young people are increasingly being forced to live with their parents into their 30s. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
It is thought by some
people
that youngers, who can not afford the high cost of housing, can live with their parents
into their 30s. In this
essay, I will outline the perceived drawbacks of living with parents
, rather than living alone, and explain why I take the view that the benefits of this
outweigh the disadvantages.
Those who oppose living with parents
tend to have two main misguided assumptions. First
of all, they believe that staying in the same house with parents
means young people
have no sense of responsibility. They worry this
may have an adverse effect on seniors' healthy because they need to do more housework and have more pressure. Another fear is that the younger will have less privacy. Indeed, it was once reported that the majority of young people
do not have their own space which is harmful to their mental health. That reporting, however
, has since been thoroughly discredited.
Clearly, the advantages are far more significant. One is that young people
can save plenty of money because they do not need to pay high rent. This
may lead to them having more available money which can be invested in the stock market. The other main benefit is in terms of parents
' health. Folks are easier to suffer from diseases, such
as heart disease, dementia and cancer. The closer you are to your parents
, the more chances you will get to help them.
In conclusion, although
some still argue against young people
living with parents
, their concerns are unfounded. In my view, the advantages of this
outweigh the disadvantages.Submitted by 1980987589 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite