It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films, and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the development of the
internet
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films
, some Use synonyms
people
tend to believe that travelling to other places is not necessary for them to learn about the Use synonyms
culture
anymore. In the main, I'm opposed to Use synonyms
this
opinion, because we tend to be biased towards the Linking Words
culture
and only learn part of the Use synonyms
culture
from Use synonyms
books
, Use synonyms
films
and the Use synonyms
internet
.
Bias is likely to occur if you only receive information from Use synonyms
books
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films
, and the Use synonyms
internet
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This
is because the stories described in Linking Words
books
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are deliberately selected by authors or producers. Only a snapshot of a certain Use synonyms
culture
is shown, and the social-economic context is inaccurately reflected in Use synonyms
such
resources from time to time. Linking Words
In addition
, news and videos on the Linking Words
internet
tend to show Use synonyms
people
part of the truth. In Use synonyms
this
case, when the information from Linking Words
books
, Use synonyms
films
, and the Use synonyms
internet
is limited, imprecise, or distorted, Use synonyms
people
who lack overseas experience are incapable of applying their critical thinking skills on the issues being told, leading to bias being generated towards certain cultures.
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People
who travel to other places gain a deeper and a more well-rounded understanding of other cultures compared to Use synonyms
people
who choose to broaden their horizons solely by Use synonyms
books
, Use synonyms
films
, and the Use synonyms
internet
. Use synonyms
Although
different values and social beliefs can be carried via these media, Linking Words
people
gain a unique and distinct experience when they travel to all kinds of exotic locations around the world. Use synonyms
For example
, tourists who travel to Japan are always amazed at the freshness and the variety of food in local restaurants, even though they've tried sushi or sashimi in their own country. The Linking Words
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-hand experience gained from travelling will never be substituted by the knowledge learnt from Linking Words
books
, Use synonyms
films
, or the Use synonyms
internet
.
In summary, I disagree with the idea that learning from Use synonyms
books
, Use synonyms
films
, and the Use synonyms
internet
makes travelling unnecessary, due to the fact that Use synonyms
people
may be biased towards a certain Use synonyms
culture
, and they may miss the opportunity to gain a full understanding of the social context.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite