the follwing maps show some of the changes in Dubi in recent decades.

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The two maps demonstrate how the Clock Tower roundabout of Dubai in its current form and

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was in the past years.

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it is clear that

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present-day Dubai has changed dramatically and it has moved towards modernization. A lot of skyscrapers fill the roadside and the skyline of the city has changed,

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the population has substantially increased Currently, at the edge of the Clock Tower roundabout pine trees have been planted,

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, all trees on the roadside were removed.

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population growth,

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more skyscrapers have been built in the desert.

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, some of these were demolished and have been built again and

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city has become more modern and bigger. It can be seen elemental of the roundabout is the only feature that has not changed. In the past, in

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area just three buildings and one bungalow were built,

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one of the oldest buildings has been developed and added a billboard.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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4 paragraphs

158 words

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the follwing maps show some of the changes in Dubi in recent decades.

Some people say that what people do to protect the environment cannot make a difference. Others say that individuals can help to protect the environment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people traveling inside thes vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.