the follwing maps show some of the changes in Dubi in recent decades.

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The two maps demonstrate how the Clock Tower roundabout of Dubai in its current form and

its

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was in the past years.

Overall

it is clear that

present-day Dubai has changed dramatically and it has moved towards modernization. A lot of skyscrapers fill the roadside and the skyline of the city has changed,

also

the population has substantially increased Currently, at the edge of the Clock Tower roundabout pine trees have been planted,

however

, all trees on the roadside were removed.

Due to

population growth,

also

more skyscrapers have been built in the desert.

In addition

, some of these were demolished and have been built again and

this

city has become more modern and bigger. It can be seen elemental of the roundabout is the only feature that has not changed. In the past, in

this

area just three buildings and one bungalow were built,

also

one of the oldest buildings has been developed and added a billboard.

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the follwing maps show some of the changes in Dubi in recent decades.

In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider; the rich are becoming richer and the poor are even getting poorer. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap?

An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is apent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree ?