the follwing maps show some of the changes in Dubi in recent decades.
The two maps demonstrate how the Clock Tower roundabout of Dubai in its current form and
its
was in the past years.
Correct pronoun usage
it
Overall
, it is clear that
present-day Dubai has changed dramatically and it has moved towards modernization. A lot of skyscrapers fill the roadside and the skyline of the city has changed, also
the population has substantially increased
Currently, at the edge of the Clock Tower roundabout pine trees have been planted, however
, all trees on the roadside were removed. Due to
population growth, also
more skyscrapers have been built in the desert. In addition
, some of these were demolished and have been built again and this
city has become more modern and bigger.
It can be seen elemental of the roundabout is the only feature that has not changed. In the past, in this
area just three buildings and one bungalow were built, also
one of the oldest buildings has been developed and added a billboard.Submitted by TUTOO on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
▼