Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

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Nowadays a vast majority of people cannot succeed while studying at school. Many of them have rather bad marks and do not cope with an educational program.
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, a young generation is capable to become successful and
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all the goals in their lives even if they do not study very well.
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plan, children ought to evolve in other spheres. In my opinion, some teenagers achieve great aims after school as they self-develop and are fond of books and blogs
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the Internet that inspire them to do what they like. Adolescents’ attention span at school is not high;
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, they are able to spend all their leisure time programming, painting, selling handmade pieces of art or taking photographs.
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, children who cannot concentrate on
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subjects sometimes have unusual talents in other fields.
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, one of the most crucial things to become successful is to be interested in at least one sphere. A person should choose
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a field and continue to develop in
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area. If a teenager does not like subjects that are offered during secondary education, he needs to find his own sphere of
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, an adolescent fails
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Mathematics, but he can be a magnificent writer or have
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blog or a YouTube channel with millions of subscribers. To sum up, people succeed in life being not very good students as they evolve and have talents in different fields. Not
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, children should not forget that they can achieve their goals only if they work hard and strive
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self-development.
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