Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
Nowadays a vast majority of people cannot succeed while studying at school. Many of them have rather bad marks and do not cope with an educational program.
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all the goals in their lives even if they do not study very well. Change the verb form
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, children should not forget that they can achieve their goals only if they work hard and strive Correct your spelling
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