WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Friend,
I hope my letter finds you in good health. I heard the news about you going to camping. I was quite thrilled and excited at the same time to find out about the adventure you were about to hop on.
Firstly
, camping can be a great way to unwind yourself from the hustle and bustle of daily life, and the grind of the city. It allows you to escape from the continuity of life and admire the serenity that nature has to offer. You can wake up to the birds chirping and breathe in the fresh air, all by admiring the beauty of the
environment. However
before you jump on to the adventure, there are some distresses that you might come across. Hiking can be challenging if the temperature changes, such
as rain, extreme cold or intense heat. Additionally
, camping requires some degree of preparation and adaptation to basic living conditions. Coming to the question of whether I would like to join you, I must admit, I am super duper excited about the idea. I mean what could be better to take the time off and enjoy the summers in serenity than too with your friend.
We can create lasting memories together, and explore the wonders of nature as a team.
I would for sure ask you to embark on Change the punctuation
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this
journey, though there is the possibility that you might encounter some challenges, I ensure it would be worth a try. If you decide to go, I will join you on your trip .
Looking forward to hearing your decision soonSubmitted by a.bbuttar on
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Coherence and Cohesion
The letter has a clear introduction and conclusion, adding to its coherence. However, to enhance it, try to make your paragraphs more logically structured by clearly segregating your points. For example, dedicate one paragraph exclusively to the advantages of camping, and another to the disadvantages. This will improve the reader's understanding.
Task Achievement
You've done well to address all parts of the task and maintain a friendly and suitable tone throughout the letter. To further improve task achievement, ensure that each part of the question is explored in equal depth. While you mentioned the disadvantages briefly, expanding on them could provide a more balanced view and complete response.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,