More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
Several species of wild
animals
have already died out or are facing the threat of extinction. The causes of this
alarming situation will be discussed in this
essay along with some viable solution
. The major problem encountered by the wild Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
animals
in the jungle is illegal hunting and poaching. Many hunters are targeting animals
like elephants, tigers, rhinos, lions, crocodiles and the like.
Most of these species are killed for their body parts such
as skin, horn
and teeth which are being used for fashion, medical and other industrial purposes. Fix the agreement mistake
horns
This
not only affects the animal community but also
threatens the ecosystem. For instance
, statistics reveal that thousands of tigers and elephants had been killed in the last
few decades. Today, both of these animals
are on
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apply
the
endangered species.
The Government should enforce strict laws against Correct article usage
apply
this
act and provide a possible solution by tightening the forest security, and giving / awarding life sentence
to the hunters and hunters and other persons involved in animal poaching. Fix the agreement mistake
sentences
Also
, there should be some rules to regulate the use of animal products in the manufacturing of fashion items and medicines. By doing so, this
type of offence can be controlled and gradually we can bring the endangered animals
under
the safe zone. Change preposition
into
For example
, when compared to Asia and Africa, western countries have high
level of law against animal trafficking which gives greater results in safeguarding the Add an article
a high
animals
.
To conclude, in order to protect our animals
and biodiversity from the threat of extinction, government authorities and forest officials should be more cautious and bring in severe punishments. This
will definitely help to protect our animals
and preserve / conserve our environment.Submitted by Mrjit147 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite