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Some believe that people should make efforts to fight climate change while others think it is better to learn to live with it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#believe #people #efforts #fight #climate #change
In
this
 industrialized era,
environment
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the environment
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 is totally abolished and there are various effects of
this
such
 as pollution,
wild fires
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wildfires
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 and storms. In
this
 essay, the emphasis will be given
on
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 efforts people can make to refine the environment or they have to be used to
this
 condition, in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly
, the only person that can save
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surrounding
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 is the human.
Also
, humans can use various strategies to resolve the recent hurdle,
such
 as
by
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decreasing the use of plastic bags and by
elimination
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 of deforestation.
Although
 humans
makes
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furniture from wood, indirectly they have to face the problems like
shortage
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 of oxygen.
On the other hand
, staying as it is with the ongoing situation is not an effective way to handle the climate hurdle. With
this
, there will be
upgrade
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 in the problem as no one will
eager
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 to see a change. Are
this obstacles
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are
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because of human activities? Yes, as specifically the major tasks
such
 as irrelevant activities to pollute the environment are
perform
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 by them. A case in point, there is a festival in
india
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India
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, on the night of that occasion everyone in the country
fire crackers
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firecrackers
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 at high density and if we look at the sky it becomes cloudy and totally pollutant.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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