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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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The trend of university
students
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 studying abroad as part of their studies is increasing these days. It is thought by some
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 that it is much worse than studying locally. In
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 essay, I will outline the perceived drawbacks and benefits of overseas study, and explain why I take the view that the positives of
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 far outweigh the negatives. Certainly, there are several disadvantages to studying overseas. One of them is high costs, including housing rent, tuition fees and food costs.
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 who cannot afford those fees are going to have more pressure which may have an adverse impact on their mental health. Another fear is that international
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 will have a bad academic performance. Clearly, International
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 will live in a different environment where they do not have any folks or friends, which means they need to spend time learning local culture.
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 could lead to them cannot have enough time to study. Despite these negatives, studying abroad
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 has its advantages.
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 of all, it can broaden
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' horizons.
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, those
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 who choose to study abroad can have a valuable international experience because they will learn about different cultures and across-culture communications, which can be used in future work.
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, they will become bilingual
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. International
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 can speak a foreign language fluently because they are forced to speak the local language with native
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 in a foreign environment. In conclusion,
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 some still argue against studying overseas, their concerns can be easily addressed. The benefits,
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, outweigh the disadvantages, in my view.
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