In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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which could influence their

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, in some nations,

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are commonly taught to

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harder in order to reach their goals.

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could offer some positive and negative

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of the statement. On the one hand, young generations who are told to

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hard in achieving their dreams gain several benefits.

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, they will understand the value of being a successful

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not come over a night. It needs some sleepless nights, sweats and persistent

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. As an illustration, Bill Gates, a well-known businessman who is the owner of Apple, had failed and been rejected by several investors before becoming the wealthiest man in the world.

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, youngsters who are encouraged to be ambitious might plan their

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at the earliest, compared with other

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at their age, who do not put a lot of emphasis on it.

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, they will probably have a higher possibility to achieve their goals as they set their

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at the beginning of their life.

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, in South Korea,

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are trained by agencies when they are still elementary students.

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, they will probably become a famous artist before their 20s.

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, an ambitious person might give negative

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on numerous people around them.

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, a child, who is told to be number one in the class might carry on anything to achieve it. He/she might study hard without taking care of their social life or he/she could cheat on an exam. Thence, sometimes ambitiousness could motivate people to commit a crime. To conclude, young groups who understand the meaning of effort will certainly put on their continuous hard

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and plan their

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at the earliest. Even though

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it might probably give several good and bad

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method of teaching teenagers is important as they could be superior more than the others. To prevent the bad

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, parents should monitor their

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to be on a good track.