Some people feel that boarding schools(where students live at the school during the term)are excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.
Nowadays education is
important
issue for Add an article
an important
parents
because many good opportunities can be achievable by
it. Change preposition
through
Although
, there are many converse ideas about the
boarding Correct article usage
apply
schools
but
, many Remove the conjunction
apply
believes
these Change the verb form
believe
schools
are proper
choice for students Add an article
the proper
a proper
nevertheless
, others reject them. Both of these ideas will be discussed in this
essay and a conclusion will be given.
On the one hand proponents of this
idea believe that pupils would have chance
to learn how to establish the relationship because they are alone and without their Correct article usage
a chance
parents
support, so they need to Change noun form
parent's
parents'
Add an article
a fine
Correct your spelling
find
fine
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find
friend
to pass their all joyful and difficult moments with them. Fix the agreement mistake
friends
For
example
they can undergo Add a comma
,example
pressure
of separation Add an article
the pressure
of
Change preposition
from
family
together.
On the other Add an article
the family
a family
side
boarding Add a comma
,side
schools
are good
option for Add an article
a good
children
to learn to be responsible about
their life and future. It means that they should have Change preposition
for
plan
for their life without their Add an article
a plan
parents
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parent's
parents'
interferences
and confront the result of their decisions and plans lonely. In Fix the agreement mistake
interference
other
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another word
other words
word
they should realize that all of the successes and failures depend on their own operations.
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,word
By
contrast
opponents said that these Add a comma
,contrast
schools
cause children
become
emotionless about their Add the particle
to become
family
by separating them. Because distance Fix the agreement mistake
families
remove
love and responsibility between family members.
Change the verb form
removes
In
addition
finding adequate friends is a significant point that affects Add a comma
,addition
children
manners. But, in these Change noun form
children's
schools
parents
will not able
to control and analyze their descendent and their friends. It means that a student with violent manners can instruct others. Whereas in usual Add a missing verb
be able
schools
parents
can put the
their Remove the article
apply
children
under supervision and keep them away from these guys.
Overall boarding schools
can promote pupils to get some skills like finding Add an article
a friend
friend
and being responsible while they can have negative effects like making Fix the agreement mistake
friends
children
heartless and uncontrollable. Finally
Add a comma
,Finally
parents
should investigate these points and decide which kind of school their children
should be sent.
Change preposition
to.
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