At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In

this

contemporary era, the

population

has been increasing rapidly around the world.

Moreover

, currently, so.e countries include a large number of

younger

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population

rather than the number of grown-ups.

In addition

, some of them argue that the positive effects of

this

situation outweigh the negative results.

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statement and I will give my opinion too.

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with, as

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advantage , youngsters are the major group force which assists to progress the national income in every country. Wherever

youth

has high demand in profession sectors compared to the adult age people.

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, nowadays, organizations highly tried to give job opportunities

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adolescents because they believe with

this

technological innovation,

this

age is the best and

productive

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in the community.

Therefore

, they directly or indirectly are able to progress

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income.

On the other hand

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the

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disadvantage of

this

issue is,

children's

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population

rate

increase

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,

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is

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able to create

high

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proportion of unemployed. Particularly, adult people tried to

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in their carrier positions until their retirement.

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, in

Srilanka

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the government

sectors

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workers

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retirement age is 60 years. Whereas the youngsters are becoming job seekers because of

less

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job opportunities.

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youth

population

has

impact

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in

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hardest

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way to the

nation

because

this

issue

create

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unhealthy

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environment for them as well as

it

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causes to decline

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productivity of the

nation

. In conclusion, in my perspective is that wherever

youth

has

highest

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population

in nations,

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outcomes are more advantageous than

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disadvantage

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for the countries. If we have

active

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and capable biggest

youth

capacity, we will definitely have a chance to grow our

nation

. Even if they can act

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effective and efficient way for future progress.