Some people believe in the next 10 years, nobody would buy printed newspapers and books because they can easily be found online without purchasing them.

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believe in the
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10 years, nobody would buy printed
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and
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because they can easily be found online without purchasing them. From my point side of view, I completely agree that we can easily read
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online without paying for them.
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when it comes to
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, I very much disagree with the statement. News is something we can easily find on the internet these days. Even social media
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as Line, Twitter, and Instagram provide more updated news than
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. In the past, there are many newspaper sellers we can find in the red light, but these days
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only 1 or 2
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who still selling
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why we can conclude that printed newspaper has passed their prime and online news are more preferable in
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who like to read
books
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prefer to read them printed rather than read them online. The reason behind it is that printed
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can easily mark compared to online
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and
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are just so used to touching and feeling the paper when it comes to the printed one. Some
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believe by buying printed
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we appreciate the author's works, rather than read them online for free.
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, what will happen if the Harry Potter series can easily be found on the internet back in the day, JK Rowling might not be the richest author in the world. To sum it up, printed
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will still be relevant in the future while for a printed newspaper I completely agree their time has come to an end and in the
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couple of years I believe we are not going to see them again in the market.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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