Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Most parts of the world nowadays are affected by not only environmental changes but
also
because of the growing population & low literacy rate. There are some reasons why my
country
is affected due to population , lower literacy rate & other issues,
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there are few logical solutions to it that are discussed
further
below. In my
country
, One of the important issues is Pollution. An increase in population has led to the purchase of
vehicles
for travelling purposes which eventually has led to pollution. Especially in Tier-1 & Tier -2 cities of my
country
. People usually use their private
vehicles
for travelling to the office or buy groceries or roam in & around the city for leisure. The air quality index of major cities like Delhi
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and Mumbai is seen to be declining day by day. Another significant issue is the Unaffordable education in my
country
. Nowadays, private educational institutions are demanding
fees
that are not affordable to the common man of the
country
.
This
leads to no choice for the common man apart from scholarship if they would want to provide the best possible education to their children due to skyrocketing
fees
demanded by institutions. For ,example Medical course
fees
in my
country
for one of the esteemed private institute costs around 50 Lakhs rupees.
However
,there are solutions to the above issues. People should start using public transport more often rather than using private
vehicles
to preserve the air quality index in metro cities. People should prefer going by walking to nearby grocery shops than using
vehicles
. For high educational institution
fees
, Government should bring a cap on the fee structure charged by private institutions.
This
will make esteemed private institutes more affordable to the common man. There are reasons for increasing pollution & high fee structure of private institutes but we can take necessary actions to control these problems & can help make the world a better place to live.
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  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
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