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In many countries, international tourism has become an important source of income. However, it also has negative effects. Do the benefits of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

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Many
people
 want to travel aboard because they want to see other
culture
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cultures
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 except their own. So, many countries around the world have many
tourists
 in one year and that can be significant income for their
country
.
However
 more
people
 create more
problems
. In the following
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paragraphs
pagraphs
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adventages
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advantages
 and
disadventages
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disadvantages
 will be outlined in
details
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detail
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.
In
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one
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the one
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 hand, many international
tourists
 can create
problems
 from the cultural diversity
to
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of
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 local
people
 because they have different
culture
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cultures
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, with
this
 point local
people
 will not like or hate the
tourists
 and create following
problems
.
Moreover
, each
country
 has different laws and some tourist
did
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 not follows
law
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the law
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 of
visiting
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the visiting
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country
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the country
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,
then
 they do illegal things and cause
following
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the following
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problems
.
In
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 the other hand, many
tourists
 mean more income for
country
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the country
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 because something is new for their
tourists
, and they want to try it or buy it,
that
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which
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 means it can
creates
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create
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 lots of money around the
country
.
Moreover
, some
country
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countries
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 want to create more
convinence
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convenience
conference
 facilities for their
tourists
, so they build something to develop
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a country
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country
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countries
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 that can make their
tourists
 more
convinence
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convenience
 and the
country
 can move forward for another step.
However
, the
country
 can improve their laws to be stronger by using
problems
 that cause
from
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by
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tourists
 In conclusion, many
country
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countries
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 have international tourism
can
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that can
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 offer benefits of significant income and
country
 development.
However
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 it can create some following
problems
 from cultural diversity and
different
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differences
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in laws
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in-laws
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.
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