Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Traditionally, education
systems
across the globe assess the performance of their students
using grades. My
perspective, colleges must not use Change preposition
In my
ranking
system to evaluate their Add an article
a ranking
students
which will lead to many problems, such
as health
issues due to the
stress, and Correct article usage
apply
also
they do not get an opportunity to explore deeper of their desired subject.
To begin
with, In this
competitive world
the children are more Add a comma
,world
stressful
and depressed due to the grading system. Replace the word
stressed
Furthermore
, each student is unique, some perform good
in the classroom and others may have exceptional talent in arts, sports, and music, but schools grade all Change the adjective
well
students
under the same category leads to demotivation, depression and stress. For example
, As per the
survey conducted by the Indian Child Department shows that every year more than Correct article usage
a
thousand
teenagers commit suicide Change the article
a thousand
as
they failed in Correct word choice
because
the
secondary school. Correct article usage
apply
Thus
, health
issues like stress and depression caused by evaluation procedures leads
to suicides.
Change the verb form
lead
In addition
, Apart from the above health
issues, students
do not get an opportunity to explore their desired topic. To explain more, to pursue the
Correct article usage
a
bachelors
degree from the university everyone must be passed with minimum marks in all the subjects which are defined in Change to a genitive case
bachelor's
syllabus
, which will not provide enough time for them to gain deeper knowledge Add an article
the syllabus
on
their passion. Change preposition
of
For example
, during my college, I was interested in the "Digital Signals" but I had to score minimum marks in every other subject to procure the degree certificate, which did not allow me to invest significant
amount of time Add an article
a significant
on
my aspired skills.
Change preposition
in
Finally
, to recapitulate, The education sytems
believe that grading Correct your spelling
systems
systems
inspire the youth. In my opinion, education systems
should move out of the ranking systems
to secure kids
Change noun form
kids'
kid's
health
and to provide paltform
to explore their aspirations.Correct your spelling
platform
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