You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery scholl. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter for my positive feedback on your cookery
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. The
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is neat
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and well structured and I finished the
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within a week.
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it's not a long time, it provided all the details about cooking a healthy and tasty meal. The part that I enjoy the most is that it explained how the different ingredients and flavours can work together to make a tasty burger. Since I completed the
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, I had been cooking every day for all my daily meals. I'm making all sorts of omelettes for breakfast and experimenting with different vegetables with them. As for lunch, I like to try different burgers and sandwiches, I use the same bun and bread but change the sauce and meat each time, they are all delicious. At the dinner time, I'm making healthy and low calory salads for my diet, I've replaced olive oil with apple cider vinegar as the
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suggested, and I indeed lost half a kilogram of bodyweight
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week. I enjoy the cooking and I'd like to try a specific kind of cuisine, I like Spanish food but it's rather expensive in restaurants.
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, if our school starts to offer
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, I won't hesitate to sign up and learn. Yours Sincerely, Junpeng
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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