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Band 7.5

You use public transport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport authorities. In your letter include: Why public transport is important to you What problem you face Suggest what can be done to improve public transport

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
 letter to raise my complaint regarding the difficulties that I have been confronted
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 these days. To being with, I have been using the London train station as my daily commute. As I am living
in
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 the outskirt and there was only stop at our small town, my travelling relies on that train station.
Although
 it was used to be
puntual
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 and fast enough to bring me to my office, which located in the city centre, within an hour, now it is becoming unpredictable and it often takes more than
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 hour to reach my final destination. I believe something is needed to be done about
this
 situation. I was wondering if you could check the mechanism of the train properly and timely. Even though I know that our station does not make much income for the transportation authorities, please be considerate of people like me. I would appreciate it if you could
also
 increase the frequency of the trains here since we have to wait unbearable hours. Yours faithfully, Tun Naung Win
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