You use public transport and have been facing issues. Write a letter to the public transport authorities. In your letter include: Why public transport is important to you What problem you face Suggest what can be done to improve public transport

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to raise my complaint regarding the difficulties that I have been confronted

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these days. To being with, I have been using the London train station as my daily commute. As I am living

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the outskirt and there was only stop at our small town, my travelling relies on that train station.

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it was used to be

puntual

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and fast enough to bring me to my office, which located in the city centre, within an hour, now it is becoming unpredictable and it often takes more than

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hour to reach my final destination. I believe something is needed to be done about

this

situation. I was wondering if you could check the mechanism of the train properly and timely. Even though I know that our station does not make much income for the transportation authorities, please be considerate of people like me. I would appreciate it if you could

also

increase the frequency of the trains here since we have to wait unbearable hours. Yours faithfully, Tun Naung Win

Submitted by tunnaungwin11 on Tue May 24 2022

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