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Should students be allowed to play PUBG? State your own opinion.

#students #pubg
With the advent of technology, there has been a monumental rise in the varieties of gaming platforms. While there has been a myriad of options available for gamers like video games, online sports, etc., playing games on mobile phones has been the most preferred option for many of us. One
such
 widely known platform is
PUBG
 and most recently,
students
, especially school
kids
 have been found exposed to it in large numbers. In my opinion,
this
 is detrimental and should be avoided.
First
 and foremost,
PUBG
 is an extremely addictive
game
 and the
kids
 flirting with
PUBG
 are hooked
onto
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 it for longer periods generally.
This
 will lead to a vast array of
health related
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 issues, both mental and physical. Continuous exposure to the
high resolution
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 screens of a mobile phone will lead to
detoriaration
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deterioration
 of eyesight.
In addition
 to that,
students
 will grow up to be introverts due to the lack of social activities like hanging out with peers, involving in healthy verbal discussions, etc.
Moreover
,
students
 tend to lose interest
towards
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 academics in the
longer
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 run and
this
 will certainly spoil their future. The
second
 reason for restricting
students
 from playing
PUBG
 is the theme of the
game
 itself
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 so violent.
PUBG
 exposes children to a wide arsenal of weapons and warfare with the sole motive of killing the opponents in the
game
 in order to be victorious. Even though these are virtual, the impact created on the minds of people
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 real and everlasting.
Subsequently
,
this
 may lead to the
kids
 becoming more violent and aggressive. To conclude,
students
 should never be allowed to play a
game
 like
PUBG
 which jeopardises the demeanour of
kids
 by negatively influencing their physical and mental behaviour.
Instead
,
students
 shall be encouraged to participate in physical sports like athletics, football, etc.
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