In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Nowadays,
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novels and TV
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dramas
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are increasing since there are a large number of
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essay will mention the reason these are popular and what my point of view and my experience are.
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Crime
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which is
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novels and drama
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getting more interest because of the
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storyline
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story line
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that makes
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would like to find the truth and it makes
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to addict
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and curious about the ending and they have fun
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what will happen more and more.
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popular all over the world. Because there
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many
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cases that he needs to find out
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If you watch it, you will definitely fall for it. I have been
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crime
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dramas
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since I was in elementary school as I remember.
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, my parents were
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that I would try to make a
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but I haven't done anything related to the
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dramas
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that I watched. After that, they figured out that it is just my hobby. I understand that many cases of
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happed because they were obsessed and would like to copy the
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character
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why
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parents need to pay more attention to their
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children
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. In conclusion,
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novels and
drama
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dramas
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are getting more attention and interest. Many
people
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who watch
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dramas
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and read
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book
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books
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like to follow the story and
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about the ending.
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the other hand, some
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is
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trying to copy the character and making a
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  • deviant
  • intricate
  • red herrings
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