Reading for pleasure can develop imagination and language skills better than watching TV. Do you agree or disagree?

#pleasure #imagination #language #skills #tv

Today, reinforcing the imagination and language skills have become one of the most significant issues around the world, especially among

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educational systems.

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although

, there

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wide

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range of

controverses

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controversies

related to which method is the best reading or watching TV programmes, in my

prespective

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perspective

, I agree with

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group and I will explain more in

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essay.

Firstly

, it is clear that by reading the

story books

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, magazines or any physical books we can observe conveniently the phrases and words, by which I mean not only we would learn about the words' dictation, but

also

we can boost our writing structure.

Furthermore

, it would obviously foster our

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pronunciation

, particularly if those materials have hard

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disk

like CD or DVD that possess the audio voices.

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, children would read loudly

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of sentences and

then

they can definitely be

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by their tutors or even parents, which can make a huge

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on child's ability in terms of reading, listening and

also

speaking. Obviously, I agree that watching TV series and family programmes have a wide range of merit and it would solely

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to a lot of

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improvement

in our skills

such

as listening by its visual features,

however

, we can easily lose our concentration while watching,

in addition

, if there are no subtitles below that programme, we would not know anything about how those phrases have been written. To sum up, both tactics of

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learning

languages and improving our imagination have some cons and pons,

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I suppose the positive aspects of reading physical books have upper hand over others.

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