Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Some people believe that youth adults are influenced by their experiences gained
in
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in-school
school
period, while others often thought in
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of
school
activities as a factor for future
development. Both sides of life
strongly affect children
development Change noun form
children's
during
the way Change preposition
on
in
becoming adults. In my opinion, experiences and time spent in Change preposition
to
school
are potentially a starting point for a grown
in their Replace the word
growth
believes
.
on one hand, pre-Replace the word
beliefs
schoolars
are buildable Correct your spelling
schoolers
scholars
in
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at
home
by their parents and their culture. Most of the time adults will let Add an article
the home
a home
children
know their way to behave. For example
, Eastern side countries believe in hard work as a way of self-development. Another example is China where Add an article
the family
family
usually babies learn how to talk and write Fix the agreement mistake
families
in
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at
home
. Pre-Add an article
the home
a home
school
abilities are a useful weapon when school
is up as it
can ease Correct pronoun usage
they
children
learning and therefore
their future
.
On the other hand
, life
in school
and Correct your spelling
high school
highschool
is absolutely important, experiences gained either with friends or study teams are memorable. Correct your spelling
high school
For instance
, Correct your spelling
high school
highschool
research is becoming more efficient in teams as it develops teamwork Correct your spelling
high school
Correct your spelling
which
wich
is vital for any workplace, due to the demand Correct your spelling
which
in
results rapidly. Change preposition
for
Moreover
, information learnt in school
is a base for any carreer
which is crucial for any Correct your spelling
career
carrier
person
self-development due to the difficulty of any degree, a certain level of knowledge is required. Change noun form
person's
As
an instance, Degrees in South America demand a high level of maths which Change preposition
For
are
fundamental for any degree. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
school
life
is very important either for any job or studies.
To sum up, children
development Change noun form
children's
in
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at
home
is important for Add an article
the home
a home
thie
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the
future
as children
can be easy instruct to behave. Nonetheless
, in my opinion
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,opinion
School
life
is a key to develop boost abilities for studies and workplace
and as a Replace the word
work
consequently
increasing the chances for a better Replace the word
consequence
future
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