Some people think that libraries are a waste of resource and money so computers should replace them. However, others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, some

people

have a negative idea about

libraries

because they believe that

people

do not have time to spend on library resources, whereas they think that hardware

such

as computers can be used to do the same function.

This

essay will discuss both these points and as an individual, I strongly disagree with the idea of using computers to share knowledge

instead

libraries

First

of all, the words "silence and knowledge" originated with the arrival of the

libraries

, calm and quiet nature of the library supports the peaceful minds of readers to absorb the knowledge from the books which are placed in a library.

Secondly

libraries

are not limited to a particular subject or field, but it contains resources of different streams and subjects, so spending money and resources on building and maintaining

such

a wonderful place will improve the educational field in any region.

Furthermore

, private or public

libraries

have provided a plethora of career opportunities

such

as bookkeepers, helpers, cleaners, librarians etc.., which give them financial support to run their lives. But,with the growth and development of the modern world, our young generation has given more priority to information technology devices

such

as computers and laptops. Though it seems really effective, it has many more consequences on the human body. Seating in front of a

computer

for long period can cause severe damage to the eyes, not only the eyes but

also

the other parts of the body, including the brain can be affected. So

computer

libraries

can be a pressuring issue for the youngsters and other

people

. And

also

in some countries,

people

do not have the financial stability to spend on

computer

libraries

this

can be a negative point in the field of

education

. Because since the ancient time,

education

depends on "reading books", but

this

controversial introduction of

computer

libraries

can become a great impact on the society. To sum up,

libraries

are a source of

education

in any region of the world, so it is the duty of all nations to maintain

libraries

for the sake of quality

education

Wed May 25 2022

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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