Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think is a positive or negative development?

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is increasing

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every product around the world is accessible and they can be bought by

people

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, by appearing online shops more and more, and advertising their goods

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people

are able to order their ideal things at any time and easily in every situation or location. obviously,

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issue has beneficial sides while there are negatives either, and both sides will be debated in the

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paragraph. On one hand, resembling countries reduces differences between notions and

people

with various

nationality

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can be close to each. other and somehow peace is brought to the world.

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, in the past,

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number of products were limited or even unobtainable. yet, today owing to globalization and

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increasing imports and

exports

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everything is available in any region and

people

can be owned whatever they demand, even though things which used to be unknown in their area.

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, with the resemblance of countries, their culture might be compromised, as each country is the origin of diverse, legacies and historical culture, dresses, products, ceremonies, etc. which would be destroyed if all the

people

of the world tend to be alike. in conclusion, being as same as each other is an unstoppable issue which is

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since reduces differences, enmity, and wars

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nations

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culture, in that case,

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critical heritage must be protected

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to resembling.