A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts say how you think the company should spend the money

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letter to discuss your plan about sponsoring the football club or the music concert.

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I find them both fascinating ideas, there are other subjects you should think of. In the beginning, if the football team was sponsored by a huge company like yours, they will be more prepared than anytime before, mentally and physically.

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might encourage other younger children to join the team and create a competition to make get the best out of themselves. While concerts have not been very popular in our neighbourhood,

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doesn't mean

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won't be profitable because I am sure the stage will be filled with crowds if a good band would come.

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will improve the city's tourism. Both of your thinking

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remarkable, but haven't you thought of opening a gym in the sector? A sports centre is the best thing to put your budget into

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because it is entertaining for the people and rewarding for your company I hope you consider my opinion,

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, everything is great sincerely, Ahmed Alrawi.