A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, with the advances in capitalism, it is generally thought that some populations may
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others
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by social position and material ownership. I,
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, believe that personal
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,
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, honour, kindness and trust are still crucial in societies in many aspects.
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with, many people
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others
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from physical appearances, social status and possessions
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as clothes and accessories, work status and roles, families' names and other ownerships.
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is completely normal since these traits are the
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impression of a person.
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is illustrated by a salesperson would treat a client with smart attires and own an expensive car better and with more respect than a client who looks poor and travels by foot.
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, it is undeniable that in societies
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appearances and social position are imperative whether among, business-men, colleagues, groups of friends, or partners.
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, old-fashioned traits,
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, honour, kindness and trust still play an important role in many aspects and situations. In the case of college students, he or she might approach friends who are gorgeous and dress properly with brand-name bags at
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but in the
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people that become friends need to know each other on a deeper level in the case of personalities, things in common, kindness and honesty. Populations may
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others
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but after learning about
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, old-fashioned
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will show
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. In conclusion, I completely disagree that inner
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are no longer important since appearances and social status are only the surfaces on that people
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others
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while other
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will be seen afterwards when individuals get to know each other in-depth.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social status
  • material possessions
  • old-fashioned values
  • honour
  • kindness
  • trust
  • empathy
  • media influence
  • self-worth
  • metrics of success
  • financial achievements
  • community contributions
  • superficial connections
  • emotional bonds
  • life satisfaction
  • stress and anxiety
  • policy changes
  • community programs
  • restoring balance
  • personal character
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