Your friend is about to celebrate a landmark birthday and would welcome suggestions as to how it should be celebrated. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter * Say what type of party should be held e.g. themed, fancy dress, black tie event * Suggest a suitable venue * Make a recoomendation as to entertainment e.g. Dj, jazz band etc.

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Dear Smith, Hope you are doing well. It had
a
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long time since we
last
met. I am really very happy to know that your birthday is coming
next
week. I have fascinating ideas to plan your birthday
party
and hope you will like them. In regards to the clothes, all people must wear
fansy
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fancy
dresses as everyone get a chance to show their creativity.
Moreover
, it will capture some beautiful moments with beautiful clothes. Apart from that, there is one famous Mahek Palace to
held
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birthday parties.
This
palace is
near
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by
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your home and has a big hall where we can organize all activities
such
as games for others.
In addition
, entertainment is an essential part of every
party
or event. I think Dj will be
best
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option for entertainment. We will play all
kind
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kinds
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of
party
music which will add more value to the
party
. I hope you will like my suggestions. Best wishes, Sandeep
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