you live in a room in college which you share with another student. however, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college, in your letter, - describe the situation - explain your problem and why it is difficult to work - say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Ravi from North block 22nd room and I am writing to let you know that few of problems which I am facing by my roommate due to the shared accommodation including late-night parties which made me write

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complaint letter to you. As you know , I work from home including on weekends and It is been very tough to manage my work and take my client class due to bigger noise and late-night parties as well.

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, during weekends the entire flat members play fun games and they are not letting others go to bed as they want some company for their fun and

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what about my work ? how do I pay my rent without working in a critical situation due to ongoing Covid19? I do not think I cannot bear

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current situation,

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, I would like to have a separate room with basic facilities in a good community. I am ready to pay even extra as I want to come out of

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hell as soon as possible. Hoping that I would get into a nice society. I look forward to hearing your response very soon to my request. Best Regards, Lakshmi.

lakshma999Thu May 26 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

204 words

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